Sunday, July 22, 2012

To Correct or Clarify

A writing teacher once said, "If anything can be misunderstood, it will be misunderstood."

A sentence in "Desert Thoughts" was a little unclear; so, I have changed it.

I no longer say, "We look ahead to that time when disappointment will be forgotten, when pain keeps us from sleep...."  I now say, "...no longer keeps us..."